You're the one to blame,
for having spawned this..
this exuberance,in my eyes,
in my head.
Oh it's a crazy,freak-show,
that exudes passion,and
your name's etched into my heart.
It's a love rollercoaster in my head.
It's a love-loaded monster-truck,
that's squished my nomadic heart.
It's a bow & arrow game,and I'm
bruised with this dart.
Your the magnet,you know?
And I'm the metal that's lured by you.
Your name's now etched into my heart.
It's a love rollercoaster in my head.
Your love blankets my soul,
it causes flashy eruptions in my head..
and spurts sparkle in my heart.
Oh,it's a love rollercoaster in my head
I'm spinnin..cuz it's a love rollercoaster in my head.
I'm spinnin..spinnin..spinnin..
Rollercoaster in my head..love rollercoaster..
in my head.
I'm high on love!
good..thoughts r very good but it cud be grt if u use simple words so th it will hav enough scope for making OC
ReplyDeleteit's an oc, Bali :(
ReplyDeleteBt yea..I know wat ur talking abt..only simple songs end up being good songs! :S
sorry:) i meant enough scope for composing these lines to a good song..
ReplyDeleteAs Bali said, poetry-wise, it's good. But for a good OC, try tuning to "squished my nomadic heart" :D
ReplyDeleteMe likes! Lemme hear it sometime.